John and Craig have a dialogue about dialogue. They discuss how thinking about memorizing lines can help write them, and how to service quieter characters in a scene.

We also answer listener questions about adapting plays for the screen, creating a different experience for your reader than your viewer, and whether to trust sketchily worded release forms.

Links:

• The Arlo Finch series trailer is live!
• Chunking
• shrek-2-has-been-redubbed-for-the-uk-market-730943.html"> How Shrek 2 has been redubbed for the UK market by Leslie Felperin for The Independent
• You Might be the Killer, written by Brett Simmons and Thomas P. Vitale and directed by Simmons, born from this Twitter thread between Chuck Wendig and Sam Sykes.
• Evercast allows Craig to be in the Chernobyl edit from home
• T-shirts are available here! We’ve got new designs, including Colored Revisions, Karateka, and Highland2.
• The USB drives!
• John August on Twitter
• Craig Mazin on Twitter
• John on Instagram
• Find past episodes
• Scriptnotes Digital Seasons are also now available!
• Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!).

Email us at ask@johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.